2016年12月四级 写作解析部分 参考答案

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2016年12月的四级考试,如期而至,而这次的主题,毕业选择。

四六级命题委员会绞尽脑汁,开始为大一或大二的学生敲响了警钟:毕业不是大三或大四才要考虑的事情,而是大一或大二就要开始做准备了。


题目一:

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.


假设毕业时你有两个选择:一是打工,二是自主创业。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。


题目二:


Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a decision between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.


假设毕业时你有两个选择:一是在公司工作,二是继续去读研究生。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。


题目三:

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a decision between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.


假设毕业时你的工作有两个选择:一是去国有企业,二是去合资企业。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。



纵观两个题目,难度依次增加,尤其是第三个题目。

题目一单词简单,打工和创业选择的原因也比较容易解释。

题目二也不是太难,到底工作,还是考研,思考一下,原因也比较好说。

最悲催的是题目三,joint venture---合资企业,估计会难倒很多裸考的学生,而且在国有企业工作与合资企业工作的优劣势,也比较难陈述。


正好昨晚给考研的学生直播讲解了一下考研英语一在2013年的大作文,也是毕业选择,题目如下,供大家参考。


2013年全国硕士研究生入学考试英语试题

 

Section Writing



Part B: Directions:

write an essay of 160-200 words

based on the following drawing.

 In your essay you should

  1) describe the drawing briefly,

  2) explain its intended meaning, and

  3) give your comments.



参考范文如下:                                    


As clearly implied in the illustration, numerous university graduates stop at a fork on the road, with a puzzled expression on their faces. Lying ahead are four paths in different directions, including hunting for a job, pursuing post-graduates study, studying abroad and starting their own business. Under the cartoon, there is a caption, summarizing its meaning, which reads: “Choices”.


Choice means to be for advantages and against disadvantages, but no one knows which move is the best for the life. Standing at a crossroad, presented with abundant possibilities, it is natural to be confused or indecisive. After years of study, for the first time, undergraduates are faced with a wide variety of choices, each leading to an unknown future. The choice has to be made to the exclusion of the others and is likely to determine the course of the life.


From my perspective, the reason we hesitate and shrink from making a definite decision when we are surrounded by multiple choices, is the fear that results from comparisons. Such is human nature that we tend to measure our life against others’, wondering whether we should have taken their path instead, as though all the other chances linger like a shadow around us. In this case, it is advisable for us to bear in mind that there are no two identical leaves in the world, nor did each individual life exist. Accordingly, analyzing the strength and weakness is the key to the right path. Only by adhering to the path which is suitable for us can the dreams eventually be achieved.


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四六级和考研的关联度一直很高,之前面授班就曾经告知过学生,除了要看四级和六级历年的考题,还要参考一下考研英语之前的题目。

下面三篇参考范文,就是基于这篇考研试题的范文而改写的。



题目一:

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. You are to make a decision. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your decision.


假设毕业时你有两个选择:一是打工,二是自主创业。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。



Each year,numerous university graduates stop at a fork on the road to put their four years’ knowledge and experience into application. Lying ahead are two possible paths in two directions, leading to an unknown future: one is to find a job somewhere and the other to start a business of your own. The question never fails to confuse the youngsters.


Ideas conflict on the choice because choice is to be for advantages and against disadvantages, but no one knows which move is the best for the rest of life journey. For one thing, to find a job means, as an employee, to be recruited by a company, with mature system and managerial structure helping an fresh staff quickly adapt to the working environment. For another thing, to start a business of your own indicates to run a business with your own hands, which provides a possibility to be more active, creative and productive.


As for me, without business family and background, it is advisable to find a job rather than to start a business of my own, because only in this way can I learn with the directors and colleagues, being familiar with working process and enriching social experience.


题目二:


Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a decision between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.


假设毕业时你有两个选择:一是在公司工作,二是继续去读研究生。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。

Each year,numerous university graduates stop at a fork on the road, with a puzzled expression on their faces. Lying ahead are two possible paths in two directions, leading to an unknown future: one is to work in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. The question never fails to confuse the youngsters.


Ideas conflict on the choice because choice is to be for advantages and against disadvantages, but no one knows which move is the best for the rest of life journey. For one thing, to work in a company means, as an employee, to be recruited by a company, with mature system and managerial structure helping an fresh staff quickly adapt to the working environment. For another thing, to go to a graduate school indicates a two or three years’ of postgraduate study, which enable a graduate to be equipped with more knowledge and resources or perhaps a better platform.


As for me, without specific and definite major, it is advisable to work in a company rather than to go to a graduate school, because only in this way can I learn with the directors and colleagues, being familiar with working process and enriching social experience.


题目三:

Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. You are to make a decision between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice.


假设毕业时你的工作有两个选择:一是去国有企业,二是去合资企业。做出一个选择,并且解释原因。


Each year,numerous university graduates stop at a fork on the road to put their four years’ knowledge and experience into application. Lying ahead are two possible paths in two directions, leading to an unknown future: one is to work in a state-owned business and the other in a joint venture. The question never fails to confuse the youngsters.


Ideas conflict on the choice because choice is to be for advantages and against disadvantages, but no one knows which move is the best for the rest of life journey. For one thing, to work in a state-owned business means to be empowered with a stable position, a steady income and an easy working environment. For another thing, to work in a joint venture means to be equipped with a speedy pace of working and the rapid development of individual ability.


As for me, without a strong background, it is advisable to work in a joint venture rather than in a joint venture, because only in this way can I improve my capability , grow fast in the workforce and accumulate experience for the future. 



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