成功类的话题也是托福写作的高频考点之一。面对这样的写作题目，同学们如何能够别出心裁，写出新颖的作文来呢？小新今天就来为大家对这种写作题目进行详细的解析~

你知道成功的定义吗？

成功的定义：第一种是通过努力，实现自己的目标的人是成功的人。另一种从一个人的身份，地位来判断一个人是否成功。从以上两种可以看出，一个人是否成功可以从内部原因和外部原因两种条件来判断。内部原因包括：一个人是否的热情，是否诚实，是否坚持不懈，是否努力奋斗。外部原因包括：一个人的运气，人脉。

个人成功内因思路

在托福独立写作中，个人成功内因包括他的智商和情商。智商包括智力，技能和能力。在托福独立写作中，能力ability强调先天拥有的，而skill技能是从后天获得的。因此一个人成功跟一个人的记忆力，想象力，观察力，适应力，分析能力和思考能力是息息相关的。情商包括坚持、人际关系和幽默感。

个人成功外因思路

在托福独立写作中，个人成功的外因主要包括，运气和来自别人的帮助。

成功的话题作文

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, we should be more like others than be different from others.

译文：为了获得成功，我们是和别人不一样还是和别人一样。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People holding different views cannot achieve success as a team.

译文：持有不同观点的人作为一组不能获得成功。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It’s impossible to succeed if one cannot accept criticism in teamwork.

译文：如果一个人在团队中不能接受别人的批评就不可能成功。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed in doing a new job, the ability to adapt oneself to the new environment is more important than the excellent knowledge of this job.

译文：在新工作岗位上的成功来源于适应新环境还是拥有更好的知识。

小新说：从这几道题目就可以看出，老外对于成功看重的点包括：与众不同(也可以理解为创新)，团队的重要性，有更多的技能，勇于承认问题错误，有无家长的帮助，懂得沟通交流，适应环境，知识储备等。并且提出的问题基本上是针对如何成功，成功需要具备的素质，品质(成功的方法论)展开的。

下面我们看看老外用了怎样地道的语言对于成功总结出了哪些方法论：

You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. My mom always used say, “Tell me who your friends are and I’ll tell you who you are.” And she was right on—because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires.

If we really are the sum of the people we surround ourselves with, it’s so important to surround yourself with the right ones. Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups.

小新说：这个点论证了我们托福写作成功的第一个要素：团队对于成功的重要性，聪明的人不是一个人聪明，而是周围一个团队都聪明最终成果才会更远大，这样他们才能分享更好的资源，人脉，思想和创新，一个人的力量是远远不及众人合起来的力量的。

此外这一段中还使用了一些非常好用的短语和句子，如：You are the sum of the five people you spend the most time with. 这个句子传达的意思是the outcome of team work is far more reaching than the outcome of personal efforts. 但是显然这个句子要地道很多。because millionaires surround themselves with other millionaires这个句子告诉我们重复并不算是一种累赘，而是起着一种更好的强调作用。Successful people are always networking with each other at events, conferences and mastermind groups. “network”这个词名转动更加出彩。

Every entrepreneur and successful person I’ve met is a lifelong learner. They understand the importance of constantly improving, constantly growing.

Driven people self-educate through books, audiotapes, online courses, seminars…. They’re determined to always learn new skills, to keep developing as a person—to never become stagnant. They never stop.

You have a desire to improve.Not everyone has a lot of ambition. They might be held back by fears that they can’t effectively deal with; they might not be creative enough or they might be lazy and used to settling for less if it means they don’t have to work too hard.

Then there are those that have a burning desire to constantly improve, learn new things, pick up new skills and sacrifice some fun and enjoyment now, so that they can be happier in the future.The latter group is the one that keeps improving year after year, getting things done one step at a time.

小新说：这一小段回答了托福写作成功话题的第二个问题，需要更多的技能野心和梦想。作为一个优秀的创业者，不断学习新的技能提升自己，才不会被淘汰，大部分的学习必须靠自己完成，可以通过书本，有声读物影像，在线课程，以及研讨会，这里面许多词使用得也是非常漂亮的，比如说“entrepreneur(企业家)”, “lifelong(终生)”, “audiotapes, online courses, seminars(有声书，在线课程，研讨会)”, “stagnant(停滞不前)”, “hold back(阻挡)”, “settle for less(追求少)”, “burning desire(强烈追求)”。