【托福写作】新托福写作正确的开篇方式 从此写作不尴尬!

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托福作文的开头是最能吸引考官的地方,也是能出高分的决定性因素。不同的句子开头既可以美化句子,同时也能使句子与句子之间自然过度,衔接自然,以免过于依赖过渡词,这些都会受到托福写作评分人的青睐。今天小编就伟大家整理了新托福写作开篇的十一种方式,让你的开篇“不孤单”!

用副词开头
(1) 副词修饰全句
①Luckily, he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise, he would bother me.
②Incredibly, Helena got straight A in her school report this semester.
②Interestingly, cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house.
修饰全句常用的副词有:
obviously / undoubtedly/apparently / fortunately/clearly / unfortunately/incredibly / luckily/unluckily / surprisingly/frighteningly
这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法,在意思上相等与 “It is ... 形容词that ...” 。举个例子:
Obviously, he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test.
Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.
(2) 强调副词
Hurriedly, the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction.
Dangerously, the drunkard sped down the street.
Slowly and gently, snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.
(3) 副词表示某一领域
Geographically, Canada is the biggest country in the world.
Financially, she is independent, but emotionally she is dependent.

用插入语开头
表示说话人的态度,或使句子的意思更加准确。
①Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
②Generally speaking, winter in Vancouver is gloomy.
类似的插入语有:no wonder,no doubt,in other words,in my opinion,in conclusion,in facts, a matter of fact

用形容词、并列形容词或形容词短语开头
修饰句子的主语,表示主语的特征或状态
①Frantic, the young mother rushed out the door with the baby in her arms.
②Tasty and crisp, potato chip are a favorite snack for both children and adults.
③Happy at his good marks at school, the little boy skipped on his way home.
④Desperate and hopeless, the poor man committed suicide.

用分词、分词短语开头
(1) 修饰句子主语,表示主语所处的状态或主语同时进行的另一个较谓语动词次要的动作。
①Scared, the girl moved timidly and cautiously into the dark room.( 状态)
②Chased by my dear pet cat, the mouse dashed into a small hole.( 状态 )
③Spoiled by his parents, the naughty boy always insists on things he wants.( 状态)
④Puffing and hugging, he finished his run.( 另一动作)
⑤Looking at herself in the mirror, she fingered her silk scarf on her shoulder.( 另一动作)
(2) 修饰谓语动词,表示原因、时间等。
Lying down on the couch, he felt much relaxed.( 时间)
Feeling bored, she turned on the TV and switched from channel to channel.( 原因)
Wanting to find out the business hour, she called the store.( 原因)
Having completed the form, he mailed it out immediately.(时间)

用介词短语开头
表示句子谓语动词发生的时间、地点、方式、原因、条件
①On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window
②pretending to look at something there.( 时间)
③Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地点)
④Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)
⑤Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)
In case of fire, use the stairways.( 条件)

动词不定式开头
强调谓语动词动作的目的
①To celebrate the arrival of the Millennium, we held a grand party in the hotel.
②To show my trust on him, I deposited $ 10,000 into his bank account.

用独立分词短语开头
使句子有正式的味道
①Birds singing in the tree, another routine day starts.
②Sea gulls flying over the water, the old fisherman flung his fishing meat into the open sea.
③A dog following them, the police searched every suspect.

用过渡句开头
表示此句与上下句的关系
①Consequently, I slowed down to avoid a fine ticket.
②In fact, she was a kindhearted woman.

用同位语开头
表示主句位于动词发生的时间、地点、原因、方式、条件等
①A signing officer of the bank, Jane signs her name hundreds of times each day at work.
②A TV addict, Jim watches TV movies one after another every evening until after midnight.

用副词从句开头
表示主句谓语动词发生的时间、地点、原因、方式、条件
①When you are in need of help, give me a call.
②Wherever you go, I follow.
③Since your children love hamburgers and fries, we might as well eat in MacDonald.
④As if it were summer, everybody wear shorts and a T-shirt.
⑤In case that you get lost, call me at this number.

用名词从句开头
作整句的主语
①Whether you take the position or not makes great difference to me.
②Why I am unhappy is something I can’t explain.
③What they should do about the hole in the roof is their most pressing problem.

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