雅思写作范文:低龄化对当今社会和未来社会的影响

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雅思写作范文:低龄化对当今社会和未来社会的影响

Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries? (2018.02.01)

其实这个题目是很久以前的老题了,分析的是低龄化对于当今社会和未来社会的影响。


针对社会现状来说:

小孩子人数多会导致教育资源紧张,因为大部分15岁以下的孩子都是处在学龄;不仅如此,同龄人之间竞争也会变得更激烈,而小孩子心智还不成熟,会遭受更大的压力,不利于他们发展。不仅如此,低龄化还会导致社会劳动力不足,毕竟真正为社会创造直接价值的人往往高于15岁~


对社会未来的影响,积极和消极都可以进行分析:

从积极方面来看,未来这些小孩子成长起来会很大程度推动社会生产力的发展,都是鲜活劳动力;然而,从消极方面来看,并不是所有的孩子在未来都会找到工作,那么找不到的可能就会变成社会闲散人员,属于社会的不稳定因素。

文章直接放在这里啦,顺便用这篇文章举例分析下语法,同学们看看,单个句子是不是都能驾驭哈~

It is true that the stable proportion of the population of all ages has a role of vital importance to play in the development of a robust economy (主语从句). Yet many countries today are experiencing a steady upward trend in their young population.

With regard to the effects of such a phenomenon on the status quo, the key problem, in my opinion, is that younger generations are in the face of stiff competition for education resource with peers. (表语从句,插入语)Most youngsters under 16 are school goers and many of them are forced to become child labor early due to the lack of teachers and schools. Those who are lucky enough to stay in the school also have to undergo the intense pressure to study hard. (定语从句)Meanwhile, should a country have the disproportion of population age distribution, it would be led to the scarcity of skilled and professional labors. (if 条件句,虚拟语气,倒装)The most productive members of society, after all, usually come from other age groups.(插入语)

In terms of the future effects, I believe that both positives and negatives can be expected for those countries. (宾语从句)To be specific, more young children gradually growing up and joining in the labor force, countries can therefore enjoy a higher speed of development and a corresponding higher GDP per capita, the wide recognition of which strengthens the nation branding.(分词-独立主格;非限定定语从句)On the other hand, however, the scenario may also be extremely passive considering the fact that not all of the young generations will find a permanent job.(同位语从句)In such a scene, a high unemployment rate will be inevitable and the social order will be worsened.  

In summary, although a balanced population age distribution is preferred by most countries, it is not always probable.(让步状语) The ever-increasing population (分词定语) indeed has resulted in many problems to the contemporary community and its future influence can be both beneficial and detrimental.

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