雅思写作连接词_广州新东方
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雅思写作连接词
不管是雅思写作还是雅思白话,其实都离不开衔接词。咱们在沟通,表达,不单单是靠着各种牛气哄哄的高分词汇句型完结,衔接词恰似铆钉,恰似润滑剂,让整个表达与论述焕然一体且逻辑规整。请看本文从起承转合四个视点共享通用的一些雅思写作衔接词。另附一篇雅思9分大作文的解说,我们能够从中去发现考官是怎样灵敏运用雅思写作衔接词的。
必要的雅思写作连接词从开始到结束。
雅思写作连接词之起:
First/firstly/first of all/ to begin with/to start with/ in the first place,
First and foremost;For one thing(… for another);On the one hand(…on the other)
雅思写作连接词之承:
Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/in addition/ in addition to…;Furthermore/what is more/moreover;Namely/ in other words;In the same way/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/ after that/ after a while;Consequently/as a consequence/as a result
雅思写作连接词之转:
But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;On the contrary/conversely;Though/although/even though/even if;Unlike…. ,A…;Different from… , A….;In fact/ as a matter of fact,
雅思写作连接词之合:
Finally/eventually/in the final analysis;In conclusion/to conclude;In short/In brief;In summary/ to sum up/in sum;As I have said/as has been noted;Given the fact that…., we can come to the conclusion that…
雅思作文考官的一个例子
In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
构思过程:
独居,也就是独居,有明显的利与弊。如果你选择一个片面的观点,它显然是站不住脚的,很难争辩,需要单独讨论。主体段一段写优点,一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻觅观念上比较困难或许没有方向,建议我们依照文波雅思教授的办法分类提取观念。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的视点出发,层次分明证明明晰,值得我们学习。
Introduction
1)背景导入,说尤其在发达国家的大城市,近几年居变得更为常见。
In recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone,particularly in large cities in the developed world.
(句型结构:It + adj.forbid sb. to do sth. 后置状语补充,注意完成时has become;注意particularly的用法,举特例方便直接,类似especially但语气更强; in the developed world比in developed countries更地道;far more修饰normal代入感强)
在我看来,这种趋势的效果是好还是坏。
In my opinion, this trend could have both positive and negative consequences in equal measure.
(句型结构:简单句 后置状语;虚拟语气could have;consequences高分词;in equal measure高分搭配)
Main Paragraphs 1
1)总而言之,一个人的个人生活和宏观生活都是有益的。
The rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons.
(句型结构:被动 后置状语并列;主语the rise in one-person households替换more people choose to live alone,地道高分搭配准确;seen as语法得分点;personal & broader economic词汇得分点)
2)次要论点1:在个人层面上,独居的人可能比与家人住在一起的人更加独立和自立(共同的观点)。
On an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members.
(句子结构:WHO从句:WHO从句,高分复句;自食其力的高分词,显示词汇量)
3)以线性推理为例:独居的年轻人需要学习重要的生活技能,如烹饪、家务、付账、记账等,这类人的增加是一种积极的发展。
A young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills; an increase in the number of such individuals can certainly be seen as a positive development.
(句型结构:主语从句 插入语 不定式并列 宾语all of which从句;简单分句 被动;valuable得分词;an increase语法得分点;such individuals指代准确,语法和词汇得分点)
4)次要论点2:从经济角度看,独居的倾向会导致住房需求的增加(加上观点)。
From an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result ingreater demand for housing.
(句型结构:前置状语 后置定语 简单句;trend towards living搭配准确,词汇和语法得分点;result in学术搭配,词汇得分点;demand for housing词汇得分点)
5)举例说明:这将有利于建筑公司、房地产中介公司和其他依赖业主购买产品的公司。
This is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services.
(句型结构:简单句 宾语并列 宾语that从句;likely to benefit学术搭配,词汇得分点;construction industry & estate agents展示词汇量;rely on homeowners词汇得分点)
Main Paragraph 2
1)段落开头的总结:以上个人和经济上的争论可以从相反的角度考虑;(导言容易理解,联系是隐含的,相比之下,CC满分技术)
However, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle.
(句型结构:转折 简单句被动;given above非谓语修饰,语法得分点;be considered from学术搭配,词汇语法得分点;the opposite angle词汇得分点)
2)分论点1:与独立的好处相比,独居的人们感到孤独、孤立和不安(普遍观点)
Firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry.
(句子结构:状语主语和从句;而不是平行;语法和CC分数没有丝毫对比;孤独与孤立高分词)
3)比较展示的例子:他们错过了家庭成员或室友提供的对话和支持,但也承担了过多的家庭账单和责任;在这种情况下,这种趋势是消极的。
They miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities; in this sense, perhaps the trend towards living alone is a negative one.
(句型结构:简单句并列 宾语从句 简单分句;miss out on地道搭配;emotional support, daily conversation & flatmates词汇加分点;bear the weight of高分搭配,词汇得分点;a negative one指代准确避免重复,语法得分点)
4)次要论点2:从经济角度来看,住房需求的增加将推高房价和租金(加观点)。
Secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for housing is likely to push up property prices and rents.
(句式结构:前置状语 简单句;the financial point of view替换an economic perspective;likely to push up学术搭配;property prices & rents词汇得分点)
(5)比较表明,虽然企业受益,但一般公众,包括独居群体,将面临较高的生活成本。
While this may benefit some businesses, the general population, including those who live alone, will be faced with rising living costs.
(句子结构:让步括号补被动;面对真实搭配;生活费词汇得分上升)
Conclusion
1)总结:独居的增加对个人和经济都有好的影响,也有坏的影响。
In conclusion, the increase in one-person households will have both beneficial and detrimental effects on individuals and on the economy.
(句式结构:总结 简单句 宾补;detrimental不利的,高分词,beneficial & detrimental替换positive & negative;两个on介词短语并列,语法得分点)
雅思大作文评分
TR:双方观点完整地回答了问题,分论点详细而有深度,第一段和最后一段观点摘要到位,9点。
CC:结构清晰,结构整洁,连接流畅,易于理解,没有明显的模板痕迹,9个点。
LR:词汇量很大,同义词替换到位,搭配准确,9分。
答:句子结构多变,复句实用灵活,无语法错误,9点。
(13 sentences, 306 words, band 9)
考官经典的雅思作文4段13段句子模板,我们可以模仿哦,注意这里所谓的模板是指他熟悉和擅长的一种风格结构,而不是具体的模板句型。
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